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Could you check my grammar?

New_Consequence_9975
I've been Philippines in early 20s through Compassion, a NGO. They sponsor the poor children who lack access to nutritious meal and education. In Philippines, it's common for men to abandon their wives and children to avoid from responsibility. During my visit, I met a family supported by Compassion. I was going to pray out loud for them, asking their father hope keeping his family. One of companion told me that could be rude for them, so I could avoid from that mistake.

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RevolvingButter•
Grammar is quite fine,but I am quite confused for some words What is their father hope? Maybe be One of the companions? Perhaps Avoid that mistake?
TheStorMan•
I came to the Philippines in my early 20s through Compassion, an NGO. They sponsor poor children who lack access to nutritious meal and education. In the Philippines, it's common for men to avoid responsibility and abandon their wives and children. During my visit, I met a family supported by Compassion. I was going to pray out loud for them, [I don't know what you want to say here] . One of my companions told me that could be seen as rude to them, so I didn't do it. There were quite a lot of grammar mistakes, but I could understand most of it, except for what you wanted to pray for.
SnooDonuts6494•
>I've been Philippines in early 20s through Compassion, a NGO. I've been **in the** Philippines **since the** early 20s through Compassion, **an** NGO.