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alldayedward
I drink a cup of tomato juice mixed with little olive oil right after waking up from the bed. Then, I eat an apple with bowl of mixed nut and soy milk for my breakfast. I make this for my habbit because it makes me feel energetic whenever I follow this routine. So I will continue it ever after.

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RevolvingButter•
Ignore the past tense,here is my advise. a little since little means almost nothing A bowl of/bowls Disclaimer:not an advanced English user
Svviley•
When I wake up, I drink a cup of tomato juice mixed with a little olive oil. Then, for breakfast, I eat an apple with a bowl of mixed nuts and soy milk. This routine has become a habit because it makes me feel energetic, so I'll continue with it. It really depends on the context of where you're posting it, but more or less, this is probably how I'd write it.
blueberry_longcake•
  _I drink a cup of tomato juice mixed with little olive oil right after waking up from the bed.  "a little olive oil" or "a bit of olive oil". "Getting up from the bed" or "waking up" (from sleep). You get up from bed, but from sleep you awaken or "wake up". Getting up is to stand, waking up is to cease sleeping.   _Then, I eat an apple with bowl of mixed nut and soy milk for my breakfast. "with a bowl of mixed nuts"   _I make this for my habbit because it makes me feel energetic whenever I follow this routine.  "I make this by habit because..."// You could also say that you "do this by habit", because a habit means something you do frequently or habitually.   _So I will continue it ever after. You can omit this sentence. If you feel compelled to say that you plan to continue the habit indefinitely, I would phrase it as "I do not plan to change the routine any time soon"