Thesis Statement
Shaiunho
Hello! I am having trouble creating a thesis statement as i have never done it before...
Can someone help me?
The topic was something about new year goals, priority and whatnot.
Below are what i listed while creating and were some feedbacks from my professor as i had gotten some of my thesis statements rejected:
'In this new year my goals are to...'
'In 2025, i want to prioritize..'
GOALS:
- have a healthy lifestyle
- explore new hobby
- make a change
- learn new skills
- focus on my personal goals
- prepare for future career
- have better sleep
Balance the idea
Be specific
Don't repeat words
My chosen goals:
balanced nutrition (healthy lifestyle)
technical expertise (learn new skills)
career readiness (prepare for future)
If one of the goals/priority are written in nouns then it all has to be noun or if adjective then adjective..
This is my current thesis statement that i made:
In 2025, my focus will be on balanced nutrition, technical expertise, and career readiness.
Thank you in advance for your help! 🥹🥹